I have now finished my research and development project.
I thought that my project definately improved once I changed the topic to a more narrowed focus. Just looking at narrative meant that my treatment could benefit from a detailed analysis of the conventions of a fantasy narrative. I think that my project could be improved by perhaps one or two more case studies. Though I feel that I learnt probably as much as I could about fantasy narrative as they are all extremely similar. The conventions don't vary much from film to film despite extremely different styles.
I feel that my treatment could have been improved by spending more time on drawings. Despite my quite poor drawing skills, I think that more location sketching would have helped to convey the feel of the magical world. Because I just wrote the key events of the narrative, I did not describe the characters, locations or atmospheres at all. I think that just writing the narrative was enough for this project though, and reflected my research well.
